This is a case where I redrew - it's actually a cut & paste job on panel 3. Why? Well, I have some trouble keeping my dialogue succinct. This may not be very succinct, but compared to how it used to look, well:
WARNING: WALL OF TEXT ALERT!Yes, I know Paul's hair should be black, but I didn't fully shade it. I was trying to keep some of the texture.
This was a bottleneck. There will be more tomorrow.
